When the sun is shining
and I'm having fun
I'll cycle cycle, cycle on.
or cross the fells traverse
and over sparkling water go
and down the frothing river
but when its
raining dreary
wet.
I'll stay inside
or as yet
walk between the drooping trees
and think.
Or prehaps.
When the sun is shining
and I'm having fun
I'll cycle cycle, cycle on.
but when its raining dreary
wet.
I'll stay inside
or as yet
walk between the drooping trees
and think.
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2 comments:
I really like the poem.
I think that the first verese needs a little more work, and then it would be a really excellent poem
Yes it is the last 3 lines of the first verse - what do you think I could do to improve them?
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